I like it a lot. I think it only needs some variation in the bass line and some breaks in the guitar. Maybe try to get like a record scratch effect [not sure of the terminology] on the guitar and beats at some of the breaks [?]. And theres a hi-hat hit thats sorta off beat. I think it sounds fine if that was your intention, but it repeats a bit too much I think. I'm by no means a reputable reviewer, so this is just my humble opinion.

This is really cool. So chill. The flute part reminds me of the Braveheart theme at times. Good stuff+++

Very moving. I really like the sound of the piano and the timing is great. Very good work!